Grade 4 & 5 --I would like you to use this blog post as a way to demonstrate your attempt at using the cursor to edit and revise writing.
Copy the sentences in purple below and paste it into your "comment". However, you must use the cursor to make revisions and add to this sentence as we discussed as a group. DO NOT RETYPE -- REVISE! :)
today is a great day cuz i came to the library. i luv my skool LIEberry because it has so many bunnies i like. i also think the library is kool cuz (explain why you like the library and delete thiese in the parenthesis).